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once apon a time,
the story once began.
there was a princess,
and a dark, old man.

the princess was happy,
the man was so sad,
his dog was his friend,
the only one he had.

She was an angel,
his childhood friend.
the man was on earth,
his life near its end.

at the age of 90,
he passed away,
why was he happy?
on that final day?

she visited him once
in a dream he'd had
there happy in heaven
all is good, not bad!
©2005-2009 ~natzandcatz
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this is a poem about a childhood friend visiting an old man...

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:iconichabod1799:
wow, thats awsome, wish my poems were as good as that, nice and well written, keep up the great work

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:iconpena-mannila:
wow! this is brilliant
the rhymes are so fluent..and...and...the story is simple, and yet so nice...um
so simple and so brilliant...should I...yeah *favs*
:iconnatzandcatz:
thank you! :hug:

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Blessed Be,
#~Natti~#
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:iconnatzandcatz:
thank you... i will keep working on my poems.

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Blessed Be,
#~Natti~#
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:iconsirquester:
Natt! This is soo good!! Another beautiful poem. Easily a favourite of mine. :)
:iconnatzandcatz:
thank you! :hug:

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Blessed Be,
#~Natti~#
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:iconberyc:
happiness.. something missing so much in my work recently.. nicely written..

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I am different. I will not change. You are normal. You are Jealous.
:iconnatzandcatz:
thank you

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Blessed Be,
#~Natti~#
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